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Нужно срочно проверить текст проэкта, поправьте ошибки, их вроде и не так много. The Influence of the Internet. Bad or Good? Everybody knows thatgetting information is one of daily necessities of a human being. We can learn much about the world by reading newspapers and magazines, listening to the radio and by watching TV. So the people can't do without mass media — press, radio, television, and of course, the Internet. So as Winston Churchill said knowledge is power. That’s why, I would like to speak about influence of Internet in our life. Bad or Good? Internet is one of the most important kind of mass media it takes 16% of mass media.

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hyplemon · Accepted Answer

So the people can't do without mass media — press, radio, television, and of course, the Internet. — Не "the people", а просто people. Перед "of course" — запятая. That’s why, I would like to speak about influence of Internet in our life. — Здесь запятая не нужна.Bad or Good? — Было уже, лучше заменить или убрать.Internet is one of the most important kind of mass media it takes 16% of mass media. — "Mass media" повторяется, лучше оставить просто "Internet is one of the most important kind of mass media".They are all friendly and nice on their Facebook chat, but when they meet each other in the hallway of their school, they don’t do anything more than saying, “Hi. — перед "Hi" запятая не нужна.

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