Пожаалуйста: 3 сочинение по английскому языку my pocket money

I know that a lot of parents encourage their children by giving extra pocket money for each good mark. All parents want their children to study well.I think that it is good and bad, too. Children are glad when they get pocket money, especialy for their good studying. They can buy things they wish.I consider that these childern will study with application and get good estimations, because money is a stimulus. But it is wrong. All children must tryto get knowledge, but not money. Parents mustn`t pamper their children too much. Don`t forget that sometimes there are situations when they will not have money in their own pocket.