Правельно ли составлен текст? One evening we went with my mother to the bookstore. The shop was very dark and cool. Suddenly…

Правельно ли составлен текст? One evening we went with my mother to the bookstore. The shop was very dark and cool. Suddenly we heard footsteps, I went to the sound. But in the room where there were steps it was not the people. I was scared me and my mom decided to leave. All night I could not sleep because I was shock-. On the morning I decided to go back to the shop, but the sign on the door "closed." I asked in a nearby shoe, how long have closed the book, and she said, "For two months, as it is closed." I was scared and I decided to forget this day as a dream. Исправьте недочеты (7 класс) Всех отблагодарю!